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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates that the central library now has been changed inside
features
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. 
Overall
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, the major difference between the old and new plans is added some new
features
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 are replaced
as well as
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 a few
features
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 are removed.
However
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, a new plan described from the entrance to the library has
left
Correct article usage
a left
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side
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 and all reference
books
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 are behind
this
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.
Also
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, storytelling events and children’s fiction
books
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 are situated
last
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room
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 of the left corner and two sofas are inside
this
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 for sitting.
Moreover
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, the cafe is on the
right
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side
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 of the entrance three self-service machines are behind the coffee
room
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 as well there are information desks and adult fiction
books
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.
In addition
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, the lecture
room
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 is on the
right
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side
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 of
this
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 row and the corridor is free of space.
Furthermore
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,
according to
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 the previous plan, from the entry gate tables and chairs were centre of the building and the reading
room
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 was left-hand
side
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 in the first row. Adult fiction
books
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 were backward of that and the computer games
room
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 was end of the corner.
Additionally
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, the enquiry desk was
right
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side
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 of the entry gate and adult non-fiction
books
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 were behind that
room
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. The children’s
books
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room
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 was
last
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 in the
right
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 corner. All
features
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 are relocated in the new building.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words features, side, books, room, right with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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