The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates that the central library now has been changed inside
features
.
Overall
, the major difference between the old and new plans is added some new features
are replaced as well as
a few features
are removed.
However
, a new plan described from the entrance to the library has left
Correct article usage
a left
side
and all reference books
are behind this
. Also
, storytelling events and children’s fiction books
are situated last
room
of the left corner and two sofas are inside this
for sitting. Moreover
, the cafe is on the right
side
of the entrance three self-service machines are behind the coffee room
as well there are information desks and adult fiction books
. In addition
, the lecture room
is on the right
side
of this
row and the corridor is free of space.
Furthermore
, according to
the previous plan, from the entry gate tables and chairs were centre of the building and the reading room
was left-hand side
in the first row. Adult fiction books
were backward of that and the computer games room
was end of the corner. Additionally
, the enquiry desk was right
side
of the entry gate and adult non-fiction books
were behind that room
. The children’s books
room
was last
in the right
corner. All features
are relocated in the new building.Submitted by psingh8059 on
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