The diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The diagram presents the process of how to
recycled
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recycle
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plastic bottles.
Overall
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, the method consists of 9
difference
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different
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stages,
to begin
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with
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with,
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people throw a bottle
to
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into
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a
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the
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rubbish and the end
of
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apply
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stages
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stage
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is a result of recycling.
Initially
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, when people throw a bottle
and
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apply
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it
was
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is
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keeped
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kept
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by a refuse collection vehicle.
Then
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, bottles were separated at the recycling centre and compressed
to
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into
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sqare
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square
figure
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figures
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.
Next
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The next
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procress
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process
progress
is crushing a block for
clean
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cleaning
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by
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with
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the
crush
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crushing
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machine. In the 6 stage, it
namely producing
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produces
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a plastic pellet and
send
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sends
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to
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it to
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the process of heating a pellet when pellets have sufficient high temperatures and melted,
This
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is a raw material for
create
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creating
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a new product. In conclusion, the recycling cycle will be
recyled
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recycled
again when people throw a plastic
product
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products
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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