The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The histogram
give
Change the verb form
gives
the
information about how many Correct article usage
apply
pineapple
were exported all over the world by the top three producing countries in 2009 and 2019. Change to a plural noun
pineapples
Country
B exported near
4.5 Change the word
nearly
million
metric tonnes
in 2009, which was more than three times as much as country
A(1.3 million
metric tonnes
). Meantime, the number of pineapple
exports of country
C was
merely exceeded 0. Verb problem
apply
However
, pineapple
exports by country
A boosted
sharply to over 10 Verb problem
increased
million
metric tonnes
while
country
B experienced a decline in production
of Correct article usage
the production
pineapple
as
1.8 Change preposition
of
million
metric tonnes
in 2019. Country
C went through a slight rise with 0.5 million
metric tonnes
in the same year and still was the country
with the least production.
The pie charts illustrates
the disruption of cost to the consumer of each Change the verb form
illustrate
pineapple
in 2019. Distrubution
and retail accounted Correct your spelling
Distribution
the
largest part Change preposition
for the
as
25% Change preposition
at
while
export costs were the smallest proportion with
4%. The percentage of profit (18%) and taxes (16%) were the second and third largest proportion separately. The rest breakdown of the cost came from international transport, import licences and Change preposition
at
producer
.
In summary, Fix the agreement mistake
producers
country
A turned to
be the Change preposition
out to
top one producing
Correct your spelling
top-producing
country
for pineapple
exports in 2019 and the majority of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple
lay in distribution and retail.Submitted by JJ on
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