Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the gorvernments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

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technology has covered all

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of the globe because of

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scientific

research

.

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, there is an argument that scientific

research

should be done by the

government

instead

of

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private companies.With

this

, I totally agree.

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is that it is important for the

government

to ensure the public that scientific

research

serves the greater good rather than just corporate profits.As for the

gorvenment

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government

, the funding is usually

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and

accessibility

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.To be more specific , the primary duty of the leader is to guarantee the safety of the nations .

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government

funding

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are often focus

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societies

such

as healthcare ,education and the military which can provide a better future and prosperity to the countries. Next ,if the private sector is controlling the significant

research

area could lead to

risk

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of monopolies.As the

research

is being conducted by private businesses ,

consequently

, the waste of talents and

resourses

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resources

will be seen because of the

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innovation and accessibility to scientific advancement .

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,the

government

can ensure rare

resourses

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resources

can be explored by

scientist

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and

talent

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people to foster international collaboration and

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global knowledge. In conclusion ,based on the positive development of the

government

rather than private companies ,I agree

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scientific

research

should be carried out by the

government

in order to avoid any bias and for a higher quality of life.