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The chart below gives information about the revenue of A&V Teach Company from 200 to 2004.

The chart below gives information about the revenue of A&V Teach Company from 200 to 2004.
The bar graph below illustrates the number
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 monetary from consumption in three types of technology productions in
US
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million
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 between 2000 and 2014.
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,
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 there was a similar trend in both three kinds as
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laptop
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laptops
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,
smart phone
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smartphone
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,
cameras
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and cameras
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, in spite of a total of
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the laptop
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laptop
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laptops
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 was
the
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dominant. In 2000, there was
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laptop
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a laptop
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 at more
4
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million
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, cameras and
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smartphone
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smartphones
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 not
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. In the next year, the figures
of
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laptop
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laptops
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 showed a decrease,
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and smartphone
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smartphone
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smartphones
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 and
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camera
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cameras
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 launched with a bad proportion -1,8 and -1
million
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 respectively. After a decline, in 2002, the
laptop
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 had a
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steadily
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 increase,
while
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the camera
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camera
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the camera
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 began
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had
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 profits when reached 1
million
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dola
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dollar
,
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and smartphone
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smartphone
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and smartphone
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 continued
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loss
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 0,5
million
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dola
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. In the period 2 years later, a
dramatically
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 soar occurred in
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laptop
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laptops
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,
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smartphone
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smartphones
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 and
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camera
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cameras
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. The figures
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jumped
at
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 6
million
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dola
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 in 2003 and peaked at 8,2
million
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dola
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which
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 the highest number
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owned by
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laptop
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laptops
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.
Whereas
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camera
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the camera
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 experienced
the
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a
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gradually
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 swelling
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along with
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reaching 3,8
million
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dola
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 in 2004,
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the smartphone
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smartphone
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smartphones
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 after a boom in 2003 at 3,8
million
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dola
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,
it
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was depleted in the end.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, laptop, smartphone, camera, dola with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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