The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.

The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.
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The line chart compares the
sales
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of three different products including bread, buns and
pies
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in a particular bakery in 2014.
Overall
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, the
sales
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of
pies
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kept rising in 2014, whilst the rest two items fluctuated in the given year.
According to
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the information shown in the graph, bread was the most popular one in January as its
sales
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was
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$ 80,000 which was as much as eight times that of
pies
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in the same month.
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, the purchase of bread plummeted to $ 80,000 in May
while
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the
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of buns plateaued at $ 10,000 from May to August. After a stable period, the purchase of buns kept decreasing and reached $ 30,000
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the end of the year.What should be particularly mentioned is that the
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of
pies
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witnessed a four-times growth in 2014 which was from $ 10,000 to $ 40,000 from January to December.
To sum up
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, it can be apparently seen that the purchase of the three products dramatically changed in a year.
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