The chart below give the information about the percentage of the adults population who were overweight in four different countries in 1980,1990,2000
The bar chart shows
explanation
Correct article usage
an explanation
about
the Change preposition
of
number
of population of adults in Use synonyms
Add an article
the percent
percent
who Change the spelling
per cent
experienced
overweight in Verb problem
were
Japan
, Finland, Use synonyms
Australia
and Use synonyms
USA
from 1980 to 2000.
Correct article usage
the USA
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
Correct article usage
the USA
USA
predominated throughout the periods. All of the countries except Correct article usage
the USA
Japan
experienced a significant increase from 1980 to 2000, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
Use synonyms
japan
remained unchanged Capitalize word
Japan
number
Use synonyms
at
the first ten years.
Looking in more detail, Change preposition
in
USA
stood at 15% Correct article usage
the USA
in
Change preposition
of
adults
residents Fix the agreement mistake
adult
number
. Use synonyms
Then
, there was a sharp growth in Linking Words
sum
of Add an article
the sum
overweight
mature population in 1990. Add an article
the overweight
Next,
it dramatically rose and reached the highest position Linking Words
at the end
of Linking Words
frame
time. In the Add an article
the frame
mean
Correct your spelling
meantime
time
Add a comma
time,
Japan
was the lowest country in overweight residents for adults. Use synonyms
Japan
began at under 5% population and remained Use synonyms
to
unchanged Change preposition
apply
number
until 1990. Use synonyms
However
, there was a slight Linking Words
rose
between 1990 Replace the word
rise
to
2000.
Meanwhile, Finland and Correct word choice
and
Australia
had Use synonyms
a nearly similar trends
. In Correct the article-noun agreement
a nearly similar trend
nearly similar trends
Finlad
, the Correct your spelling
Finland
number
of grown-up people who passed obesity started Use synonyms
in
just over 5%. Change preposition
at
Then
, it slightly grew in 1990 and underwent a gradual jump.Linking Words
The
similar condition was experienced by Correct article usage
A
Australia
. At Use synonyms
beginning
of Correct article usage
the beginning
period
, Add an article
the period
Australia
set to just over 5% Use synonyms
as
Finland Change preposition
like
and
followed by a gradual jump. Correct word choice
apply
Then
, Linking Words
at the end
of Linking Words
frame
time, there was a sharp increaseCorrect article usage
the frame
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, japan, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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