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A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might these differences cause? How might these problems be reduced?

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It has been observed that
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 increase in
level
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the level
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 of living in a state always only seems to advantage cities
instead
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countryside
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the countryside
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.
This
 essay will explore the various factors that contribute to
this
 trend, followed by some possible solutions to solve
this
 problem. A plausible interpretation for the phenomenon development that
tha
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has
 occurred in recent decades. As the economy flourishes, people living in urban areas have access to
wide
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 range of job opportunities, that they can select and acquire. One crucial factor is that the government has performed poorly. The government failed to provide proper guidance and service functions, but only imposed rigid administrative restrictions on education, health care,etc.
This
 has resulted in a huge gap between the outcomes and expectations, and people’s
behavior
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 has not shifted in the right direction.
Consequently
, many people in rural districts still do not know
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 to improve their living standards. Fortunately, there are some measures we can take to enhance
this
 alarming situation. One of the possible solutions to
this
 problem is to change faraway people’s mindsets. They should not be constrained by their habits and old ideas, but rather should bravely and positively face a new life. By doing so, they can enjoy a higher level of living welfare,
such
 as medical services. Another
psssible
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possible
 solution to
this
 problem is to improve the government’s regulations of management
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 areas, especially the supervision of educational level and habits of life. In summary, my argument is that cities and rural
regions
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 unbalanced development can readily trigger many issues, but in
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 there are many viable solutions that people can adopt to prevent these issues from occurring.
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