The chart below shows the popularity of well-known instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021
The bar chart illustrates the comparison of the popularity of several public figures on Instagram between 2018 and 2021.
It is noticeable that the highest
followers
on Instagram were Cristiano
Ronaldo
in 2021. By contrast
, the unpopular influencer was The Rock in 2018.
In 2018, Cristiano
Ronaldo
, Ariana Grande, and Selena Gomez reached followers
of more than 100 million
approximately 110, 115, and 125 million
fans, respectively. On the other hand
, celebrities who were not really famous were The Rock and Kyle Jenner who close to 100 and 100 million
fans, respectively.
By 2021, the Followers
of Cristiano
Ronaldo
rose more than 200% which was approximately 310 million
followers
. Furthermore
, The Rock, Ariana Grande, and Kylie Jenner sharply increased to 150% which were 250 million
followers
. Then
, Selene Gomes who had been replaced by Cristiano
Ronaldo
reached followers
close to 250 million
.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words followers, cristiano, ronaldo, million with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼