You have just finished a language course provided by your company and want another. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter you should say: - why you liked the course - why you need more - and say where and when the course should take place
Dear Sir or Madam
I hope
this
letter finds you well. The main reason I am writing you this
letter is that I also
like the new course
you are about to open because it has exactly the teachers and classes I want. Also
, I have close friends in this
course
.
You know, I was happy that the course
that was right for me was at a very convenient time for me. The teacher is also
a professional teacher. the rest of my loved ones are also
in this
course
and I have time to learn things that I could not learn at the beginning.
Please send me complete information about this
course
. I want to know if the timing is right for me. I want to know about this
for myself whether it happens every day of the week or every other day. I think you will give information about these things as well.
Sincerely, JessicaSubmitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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task achievement
Ensure you thoroughly address all parts of the task. Your letter should specifically mention why you liked the previously attended course, why you need more training, and suggest specific details for the new course, such as location and timing.
coherence cohesion
Use clear paragraphing to organize your ideas effectively. Each paragraph should ideally introduce one main idea, followed by supporting sentences.
coherence cohesion
Include a more formal and appropriate greeting and closing suitable for a letter to your manager. This will help set the right tone for your message.
coherence cohesion
Consider varying your sentence structures and using more cohesive devices (for example, conjunctions, linking phrases) to enhance the readability and flow of your letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite