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The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
linegraph
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line graph
 demonstrates how
birth
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the birth
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rate
was changing
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changed
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 in China and the USA in
period
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the period
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 from 1920 until 2000. It is evident from the data that both
chines
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Chinese
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 and
americans
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American
birth
 rates went down to 8 and 4
percent
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per cent
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 respectively. It is interesting to note that
that
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the
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chinese
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Chinese
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birth
rate
 fluctuated at the
begining
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beginning
 of the given period in the interval between 10 and 15
percent
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per cent
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. There is a rapid fall
for
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of
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 10
percent
 followed by 5 years of stability.
Afther
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After
this
, 1950 witnessed a drastic jump
of
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a
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the
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chinese
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Chinese
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birth
rate
 from 5 to 20
percent
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per cent
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, reaching a peak. After rising
for
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by
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 15
percent
birth
rate
 fastly decreased and continued
decliening
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to decline
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untill
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until
 1985. An
american
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American
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birth
rate
 has approximately
same
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the same
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 dynamic as a
chinese
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Chinese
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 in the first decade.
Americans
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Americans'
American's
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birth
rate
 had decreased
for
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by
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 7
percent
 by 1947.
However
, it was followed by a rapid
grows
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growth
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for
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of
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 10
percent
 in 1950. After rapidly increasing
americans dirth
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American birth
rate
 started to steadily
going
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 down.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, rate, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 3 times.
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