The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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problematic. Some people think that

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negatively

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society

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others think that

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issue because they believe that it is

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phenomenon. I think gay

marriage

should be legal and

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essay will discuss why it should be regulated by

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, marrying

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someone who

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each other is the most important aspect. It is hard to restrict someone's heart and soul when they

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with

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each other.

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is because our earth is not only divided into two genders that

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believed.

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research from Harvard University confirmed that sometimes same

sex

species attract each other

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as

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and cows.

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this

trend is our natural

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and people should agree that it is not

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event, and

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same

sex

marriage

should be regulated by official

law

in our

society

.

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, some people may think that it may affect

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the

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society

negatively,

such

as teenagers and

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adolescence

adolescents

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to

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same

sex

relationship

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relationships

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because their way of being seems interesting to them.

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official

law

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regulations

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regulation

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regulations

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related to

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gay

marriage

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to be produced by governments.

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is because the merit

law

can protect both

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and human

society

should respect each other and youths can be acknowledged.

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, in Australia, the

law

of

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sex

marriage

is taught by

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curriculum which is the best way to educate them about

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gay

marriage

.

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same

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sex

marriage

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to be legal because it is

natural

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a natural

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phenomenon, which is approved by the researchers.

Moreover

, youths should be

acknowledged

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about

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the

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gay

marriage

and its

law

by educators.