You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart indicates the average monthly variation in prices of copper, nickel and zinc in 2014.
Firstly
, an evident decline can be seen in the figure
for the monthly change
in price
of nickel, diminishing to -3% from January to June, Add an article
the price
while
the percentage begins to rise slightly to -1% in July and remains for 2 months. From September
to the last
month of the year, the percentage of average monthly change
in the price
of nickel fluctuatley
rise to 1%.
There is a similar trend Correct your spelling
fluctuates
can
be seen in the Correct pronoun usage
that can
figure
for the average change
in price
of zinc during a month showing a Add an article
the price
fluctuate
decrease to -1% in June and Replace the word
fluctuating
keep in
Wrong verb form
keeping
this
figure
to September
until finally
grows to 2% in December.
As for the average monthly change
in price
of copper, the percentage met a decline from 1% in January to -1% in June with an unchanged trend during August and Add an article
the price
September
. The figure
for the monthly price
variation slightly rise
to 2% during the Wrong verb form
rose
last
three month
in the year of 2014.
Fix the agreement mistake
months
Overall
, all the prices
Fix the agreement mistake
price changes
change
had a similar trend while
both of them remained stablely unchanged during the period from July to September
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words figure, change, price, september with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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