You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the changes in ownership ofelectrical appliances andamount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below show the changes in ownership ofelectrical appliances andamount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The two graphs
indicates
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indicate
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the variations in the
percenteage
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percentage
of the possessing
of
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apply
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electrical appliances and the number of
hours
spending
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spent
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on housework in households for a week in a country from 1920 to 2019. The percentage of
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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boosts
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has
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evidently from 2% or so to the peak of 100% in 1980 and
remains
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remained
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in
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at
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this
figure for nearly 4 decades. There is a similar trend can be seen in the figure for vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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, rising from 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2000 with a stable trend during the next 19 years. As for the figure for washing
machine
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machines
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, it
increases
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increased
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fluctuately to about 73% in 2019.
On the other hand
, the amount of time people
spending in
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spend
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doing housework including washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning per week
decreases
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decreased
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nearly five times markedly from 50
hours
to 11
hours
between the year from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the changes in ownership of household facilities and the number of
hours
spending
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spent
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on housework using a household per week show a
defferent
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different
trend with each other.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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