The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The illustration depicts how
plastic
bottles
are recycled.
The 9-step cycle begins with people putting plastic
bottles
into bins and ends with the production of new products. This
is achieved by turning plastic
bottles
back into raw materials that can be turned into a range of plastic
commercial goods.
The process starts with the placement of plastic
containers into specialised bins, which are then
collected by bin lorries. They are then
transported to a processing plant to be sorted by hand. When they have been correctly sorted, they can compressed into blocks of plastic
bottles
.
At
step 5, the Change preposition
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bottles
are crushed, and the resulting fragments drop into a liquid so that they can be washed. The substance is then
placed into a machine producing plastic
pellets that can then
be heated to produce the raw material. This
can then
be manufactured into various goods that contain plastic
, and the process commences again.Submitted by writingbhos on
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