the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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the cultivation
packaging
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the packaging
process
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, the main ingredient, flour, is stored in the silos. Flour is distributed and mixed with water and oil in a mixer which produces Use synonyms
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sheets by a roller machine and cut into thin strips. After that, the Use synonyms
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strips are divided and formed into noodle discs as one portion. The Use synonyms
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discs
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fried in a dryer machine at a particular temperature. After the Correct subject-verb agreement
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noodles
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are placed into cups. Vegetables and spices are added to each cup as a complement to the ingredients. Use synonyms
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