The chart below gives information about the percentage of the adult population who were overweight in four different countries in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
The supplied chart provides
the
information about the percentage of Correct article usage
apply
the
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grown up
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grown-up
people
who were obese in the four disparate nations such
as Japan, Finland, Australia, and USA
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the USA
in
three different times.
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at
Overall
, in the year 2000
the Add a comma
2000,
people
were
overweight Correct pronoun usage
who were
is
the highest Wrong verb form
was
in
number Change preposition
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whereas
in 1980 citizens who were outsized was the lowest. Comparatively, Japan is the only country which has less than 5% of the corpulent people
in all three years. However
, USA
is the nation which outweighs in the number of obese Correct article usage
the USA
people
which is
15% in 1980, 25% in 1990 and 30% in 2000.
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was
Furthermore
, Finland has
under 10% of portly individuals in 1980 and 1990 but there Wrong verb form
had
is
Wrong verb form
was
surge
in 2000 which Add an article
a surge
the surge
is
more than 10%. Wrong verb form
was
While
in Australia, the plebeians who are outsized were below 10% in 1980, the number added to more than 10% in 1990. Yet, there was upsurge
in the year 2000 which Add an article
an upsurge
lead
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led
nearly
20%.Change preposition
to nearly
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