The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph represents the number of foreign tourists who visited attractions, which are categorised into three regions: the coast, mountains and lakes, in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, all places had an upward trend within the span of 20 years. The coast's popularity remained the most beloved choice throughout the years, with significantly increased after 1992, Linking Words
while
the mountains increased gradually. Linking Words
However
, only the lakes were facing a decline in visitors after their peak in 2002.
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To begin
with, the coastal lines had already been the most popular place in 1987, with 40,000 people a year. It slightly decreased in 1992, Linking Words
then
steadily rose to more than 70,000 people in 2007. Linking Words
Although
the first place was taken by the lakes at their peak in 2002, with approximately 70,000 tourists per year, Linking Words
then
the visitor count suddenly dropped to 50,000. Linking Words
Thus
, the coast regained its top position in 2007
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In addition
, the mountains were slowly incline, with 20,000 in 1987 to around 35,000 tourists a year.Linking Words
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