In many professional sports, there is an increase in the numbers of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions.

In the modern era,
consumption
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the consumption
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of harmful
products
for increasing capabilities is one of the major problems in
sport
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. There are numerous reasons why it is done which I'm going to explain more about in the rest of
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essay.
To begin
with, many factors entice athletes into consumption of injurious
products
. The environment of
sport
is getting more competitive and requires a lot of effort to gain a reputation. So, some individuals want to skip the effort part and acquire a reputation earlier and
hence
, they use these
products
.
Additionally
, social media and its users have doubled the pressure on athletes by advocating for renowned individuals.
Therefore
, some people want to be the
one
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who
is
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prouded by his/her peers and families and opt
these
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illegal ways which are very dangerous and usually jeopardize their lives.
For example
, In 2021, a Brazilian bodybuilder died because of consuming a lot of medicine to get fit. There are abundant ways to tackle
this
problem.
Firstly
, manufacturers and
distributers
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of these
products
should be arrested and put in jail for a
lot
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long
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time until they regret what they have done.
Secondly
, the government should adopt highly stringent laws about these banned substances and even arrest athletes who use them because of injustice in competitions. FIFA,
for instance
, suspends any person who
use
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forbidden
susbtances
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substances
up to 20 years from any activity in football.
Finally
, healthy
sport
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have to be touted
amid
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disparate groups of society
epecifically
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specifically
the youth to combat harmful
products
.
To conclude
,
world
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the world
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can not address the problem of injurious
products
in
sport
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sports
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unless people and governments cooperate and utilize the solutions that were mentioned.
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