The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting this main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting this main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows information about the
number
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of international tourists to three different areas in a European country during a 20-year
period
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the lake attracted the most
visitors
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in the
period
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,
while
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the mountain is the least popular place among the three areas.
In addition
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, all tourist attractions showed an increase in 20 years. In 1987, the
number
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of
visitors
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to the coast was 40,000, which was the highest place,
in contrast
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, the mountain only appealed to 10,000
visitors
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at
this
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time. The coast dropped to around 35,000 in the next 10 years before
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recovery and grew rapidly, reaching a peak at over 75,000 tourists in 2007. Meanwhile, The
number
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of foreigners to the mountain fluctuated between around 20,000 and 30,000 in the first half of the
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,
then
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increased to around 34,000 in 2007. As regards the remaining category, the lakes began with the lowest
number
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of
visitors
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then
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rose steadily to hit the highest point in 2002, which was 75,000 tourists.
However
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,
this
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attraction witnessed a decrease in the late
period
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, staying at 50,000 foreigners in 2007.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, period, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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