The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration below demonstrates the process of manufacturing instant
noodles
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Overall
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, there are 8 states in the diagram, consisting of transporting flour, mixing ingredients, shaping, cooking, drying, seasoning, packaging and labelling.
The first step is
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to collect flour into storage silos by trucks, and
then
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which is mixed with water and oil. Once they are mixed sufficiently, they become dough, and later placed on the roller to press flat, becoming sheets. After which, these sheets enter the manufactured line to cut into strips, becoming
noodles
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. Following
that is
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another forming stage where the sliced dough is shaped into discs and
then
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fried in the oil.
Next,
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these fried
noodles
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are dried to cool, to reduce the high temperatures.
Subsequently
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, in the packaging process, manufactured
noodles
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are settled down in cups
along with
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sauce packs and dried vegetables, and in the end, as products are labelled, and sealed, they are accessible to be sold.
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Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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