The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration below demonstrates the process of manufacturing instant
noodles
.
Overall
, there are 8 states in the diagram, consisting of transporting flour, mixing ingredients, shaping, cooking, drying, seasoning, packaging and labelling.
The first step is
to collect flour into storage silos by trucks, and then
which is mixed with water and oil. Once they are mixed sufficiently, they become dough, and later placed on the roller to press flat, becoming sheets. After which, these sheets enter the manufactured line to cut into strips, becoming noodles
.
Following that is
another forming stage where the sliced dough is shaped into discs and then
fried in the oil. Next,
these fried noodles
are dried to cool, to reduce the high temperatures. Subsequently
, in the packaging process, manufactured noodles
are settled down in cups along with
sauce packs and dried vegetables, and in the end, as products are labelled, and sealed, they are accessible to be sold.Submitted by Chloe on
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