The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
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information
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coffee and bananas between 1999 and 2004 with Fairtrade- labelled in five Change preposition
about both
Europeon
countries Correct your spelling
European
such
as UK
, Switzerland , Correct article usage
the UK
Denmark
, Belgium
,Sweden
.
Coffee Correct word choice
and Sweden
sales
in 1999 , Switzerland is
the highest one Wrong verb form
was
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Denmark
with 1.8 . UK and Belgium
are 1.5 and 1 sales
. The country that has the lowest sales
is Sweden
with almost 1 million
. In 2004 , The previous highest sales
icreased
to 6 which is Switzerland , Correct your spelling
increased
Denmark
and Belgium
both increased a little bit and become
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became
Sweden
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become
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became
million
in 2004 . The country that has the highest increase is
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in
UK
with 1.5 Correct article usage
the UK
million
to 20 million
sales
Sales
of bananas , comparing 1999 to 2004 . The country that has the highest increase is Swetzerland
with 15 Correct your spelling
Switzerland
million
in 1999 to 47 million
. The lowest increase is Belgium
with 0.6 to 4 . Two countries dropped thier
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their
sales
of bananas , Sweden
and Denmark
those dropped to 1.8 to 1 and 2 to 0.9 million
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