The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
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coffee and bananas between 1999 and 2004 with Fairtrade- labelled in five
Europeon
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European
countries
such
as
UK
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the UK
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, Switzerland ,
Denmark
,
Belgium
,
Sweden
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and Sweden
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. Coffee
sales
in 1999 , Switzerland
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the highest one
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with
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Denmark
with 1.8 . UK and
Belgium
are 1.5 and 1
sales
. The country that has the lowest
sales
is
Sweden
with almost 1
million
. In 2004 , The previous highest
sales
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increased
to 6 which is Switzerland ,
Denmark
and
Belgium
both increased a little bit and
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2 and 1.7 .
Sweden
finally
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1
million
in 2004 . The country that has the highest increase
is
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UK
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the UK
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with 1.5
million
to 20
million
sales
Sales
of bananas , comparing 1999 to 2004 . The country that has the highest increase is
Swetzerland
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Switzerland
with 15
million
in 1999 to 47
million
. The lowest increase is
Belgium
with 0.6 to 4 . Two countries dropped
thier
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their
sales
of bananas ,
Sweden
and
Denmark
those dropped to 1.8 to 1 and 2 to 0.9
million
.
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