The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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The introduced table shows the different sources of police budget in Britain and the total amounts of money in 2017 and 2018. The pie charts illustrate the ways how the money was spent.

Overall

, the national government is the most significant sponsor of the police budget, making 175,5m and 177,8m in the presented years respectively. In fact, it is evident that the percentage of spending on buildings and transport remains the same in 2017 and 2018. In terms of sources, other sources of funds remained approximately the same, comprising 38m and 38,5m in 2017 and 2018 respectively,

whereas

the funding from local taxes increased by 11.1m in 2018.

According to

the data, the total amount of funds rose up to 318,6m in 2018, compared to 304,7m in 2017. Looking at the details in the pie charts, it is notable that spending on buildings made up roughly one-sixth. In terms of technology, it constituted as twice as big, making around one-twelfth and one-seventh respectively (8% and 14%). The difference between spending on salaries was not striking – 6%. In 2018 it fell from 75% to 69%.

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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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