The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table graph illustrates information about
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
and
bananas
in 1999 and in Five European countries.
Overall
, in all countries, the
sales
of
coffee
and
bananas
have increased from 1999 to 2004. At
the
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first glance,
sales
of
bananas
in Switzerland had the highest number of
sales
, but
sales
of
coffee
in
UK
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the UK
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dominated by
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in the first table. To be more specific, the
sales
of
coffee
have had a steady increase in each country, the UK emerged as the highest with 20
million
euros. It is closely followed by Switzerland and Denmark with 6
million
and 2
million
each. At the bottom of the table, there were Belgium and Sweden which accumulated 2.7
million
for both.
In contrast
,
bananas
have had various kinds of trends. In Sweden, the UK, and Belgium the
sales
of it surged with 47, 5.5, and 4
million
respectively.
On the other hand
, it has fallen drastically in Denmark and Sweden to just 1 and 0.9
million
each.
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