The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table graph illustrates information about
sales
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of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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and
bananas
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in 1999 and in Five European countries.
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, in all countries, the
sales
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of
coffee
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and
bananas
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have increased from 1999 to 2004. At
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first glance,
sales
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of
bananas
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in Switzerland had the highest number of
sales
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, but
sales
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of
coffee
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in
UK
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the UK
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dominated by
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the highest
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in the first table. To be more specific, the
sales
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of
coffee
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have had a steady increase in each country, the UK emerged as the highest with 20
million
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euros. It is closely followed by Switzerland and Denmark with 6
million
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and 2
million
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each. At the bottom of the table, there were Belgium and Sweden which accumulated 2.7
million
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for both.
In contrast
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,
bananas
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have had various kinds of trends. In Sweden, the UK, and Belgium the
sales
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of it surged with 47, 5.5, and 4
million
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respectively.
On the other hand
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, it has fallen drastically in Denmark and Sweden to just 1 and 0.9
million
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each.
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