THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE CHANGES THAT TOOK PLACE IN THREE DIFFERENT AREAS OF CRIME IN NEWPORT CITY CENTER FROM 2003 – 2012
The given line graph gives
the
information about changes in Correct article usage
apply
burglary
, car theft and robbery in the center
of Newport Change the spelling
centre
city
in the period between 2003 and 2012. Units are measured in hundreds and thousands.
Capitalize word
City
Overall
, there was dramatically
reduction in Replace the word
a dramatic
burglary
rate. Correct article usage
the burglary
Additionally
, the amount of crime such
as robbery from person had fluctuation and showed the lowest points during the given periods.
According to
the data, the figure for burglary
remained just below 3500 incidents in 2003, then
it reached its peak at approximately 3800 in the next year . However
, in the following four years
the amount of Add a comma
years,
burglary
rapidly declined to about 1000. Finally
, from 2008 to 2012 there was an oscillation.
It is clear that
,
the Remove the comma
apply
number
of car thefts in the first two years
maintained almost the same number
of 2800 occurrences, after it gradually declined the
lowest point Change preposition
to the
to
just 2000 in 2006 and in the remaining Change preposition
of
years
there was a period of volatility and increased to the almost similar number
as in the beginning.
On the other hand
, the trend of robbery showed approximately the same number
of just above 500 in the first and the last
years
, where it peaked to
about 1000 in 2005 and went down to the lowest point Change preposition
at
at
500 in 2008.Change preposition
of
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