The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The line graph illustrates the value change of three different categories of metal (copper, nickel, and zinc) in
monthly
average in 2014.
Correct article usage
the monthly
Overall
, it is evident that nickel has experienced a dramatic change whilst the rest types of metal prices slightly fluctuated through the period of twelve months.
In January, nickel was the highest value of metal among the three types of metal reaching 6% until it slightly showed an
downward trend in June to exactly 3%. After Change the article
a
month
of decreasingFix the agreement mistake
months
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