The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university. Write a Full report

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university.

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The information presented in the table indicates the proportion of students who perceived various aspects of the university in the
year
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years
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2000,2005 and 2010. In general, it is evident that the data in 2010 was higher than
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that
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in the previous
years
with the exception of
range
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the range
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of modules offered by the university. Looking at the details, teaching quality had
the
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a
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significant proportion in three
years
. In
two
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the two
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years
2000 and 2005, it had almost the same ratio
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%, 63%.
This
data rose gradually by 7% in 2010. The most striking feature is that print resources reached a peak compared to the rest of all aspects, especially in 2005,
the
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when the
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ratio was 89%. Another feature is that the percentage of electronic resources was more than
two fifths
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in the year 2000 and it increased steeply in the following
years
. The figure was almost doubled in 2010, 88%.
In contrast
, there was a slight reduction in the range of modules offered.
Finally
, it is interesting to note that the building/teaching facilities remained stable, 77% positive rating throughout the
years
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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