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The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the diagram provided the process of recycling plastics.
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, the procedure is divided into two parts which are the process before plastics are sold to shops and what happens after consumers buy and use those products. According to the information shown in the diagram, there is a sorting step before collecting plastic
bottles
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 which is separating bags and rubbish from
bottles
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 and sending them to landfills.
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, the collected
bottles
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 will be delivered to sorting houses. Afterwards, a vehicle will be driven to sorting houses in order to transport those sorted plastic
bottles
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 to factories for processing. After they become new products, they will be purchased by shops and go back to customers when buying by them.
To sum up
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, it can be apparently seen that there are four main steps of reusing
the
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plastics which are distinguishing bags and rubbish, collecting
bottles
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, sorting
bottles
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 and processing.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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