The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts how many shops are closed and open in one nation from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, it is clear that
there were the largest amount of stores opened in 2011, and the lowest number were out of the market by 2015. Both the proportion of closing and opening stores experienced some fluctuations.
Looking at the diagram in more detail, by the year 2011, there were around 8500 people wanted
to break into the market, Correct pronoun usage
who wanted
while
it halved in the following year. In the beginning two years, there was not a huge difference for those who exited the market, differing by about 200 (6200 and 6000). In 2014, the numbers
of shop closures and openings Fix the agreement mistake
number
were
approaching, Unnecessary verb
apply
which
were 6430 and 6330 respectively.
We can see that the Correct pronoun usage
apply
quantity
of possessors significantly plummeted to only 600 and hit Change the quantifier
number
bottom
in the year 2015, Correct article usage
a bottom
however
, it bounced back to around 5000 and remained steady. There were
the same number of Change the verb form
was
shopkeeper
Fix the agreement mistake
shopkeepers
as
Change preposition
in
2012
(4000), after that it increased gradually until 2017, and dropped to 3000 Change preposition
in 2012
at the end
period.Submitted by Joanna
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