The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given flow chart illustrates the information about how
plastic
bottles
are recycled for new products
.
Overall
, there are 9 main stages in the process of recycling, beginning with taking the plastic
bottles
from the garbage can and ending with producing end products
.
The first step in the process is taking plastic
bottles
. To get a lot of products
, plastic
bottles
is
Change the verb form
are
taking
up by using a big recycle car. At the next stage, Wrong verb form
taken
plastic
bottles
are sorting
by Wrong verb form
sorted
worker
in the recycling centre. After the Fix the agreement mistake
workers
plastic
bottles
are compressed into blocks, the
are crushed and moved to a water tank for washing and Correct your spelling
they
move
to the next device.
Wrong verb form
moved
In
Change preposition
The
the next step is
producing plastic
pellets. Afterwards, they are heated from pellets to form raw material. The
final step, raw Change preposition
In the
material
became end Fix the agreement mistake
materials
products
like bottles
, clothers
and more Correct your spelling
clothes
products
. The last
the products
ending with delivering to the customers.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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