Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it

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number of
people
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who do not have accommodation is rising in many megapolices worldwide.
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essay will discuss about causes including joblessness and
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scam
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scams

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with property.
This
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essay will
also
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suggest solutions to
this
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problem
such
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as creating workplaces and
education
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people
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be
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more carefully.          In big cities
people
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suffering
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suffer

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from homelessness because they do not have a job. Overpopulation
cause
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causes

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do
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not enough workplaces for everyone and anyone has a risk
to stay
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of staying

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without
work
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or
do
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not
find
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finding

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its
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it

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.
In addition
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, one of the
reason
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reasons

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is
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scam
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scams

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. Nowadays,  there are many deceivers, who pretend specialists from different kinds of
organisations
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which are connected with
properties charity
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property charities

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. They make "special
offer
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offers

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" in most cases for elders and they lose their homes.
For example
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, in Russia,
according to
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statistics
report
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reports

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to police on
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scam
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scams

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with property
has
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have

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increased.       A possible solution to
this
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issue is creating more accessible
work
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for citizens.
Government
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The government

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can create
organisations
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whose goal will help
people
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find an occupation or give them paid local
work
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,
such
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as cleaning
park
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parks

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or simple building
works
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work

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.
Also
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,
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this
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these

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organisations
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provide short courses in which professionals will teach humans without
degree
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a degree

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basic
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of basic

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knowledge of different professions. Another possible solution is educating humans
how
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on how

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avoid
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to avoid

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scam
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scams

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.
Government
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The government

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can make short videos
how
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on how

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right use
internet
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the internet

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and how
see
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to see

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a
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the

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differents
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difference

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between deceivers and honest
people
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, and
the
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apply

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these videos can be shown
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while
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in

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advertisement
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advertisements

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.
For instance
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, in
Uzbekistan
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Uzbekistan,

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there is
organisation
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an organisation
the organisation

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, which help student which
help
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helps

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students, who are not going to go
an
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a

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university, find
work
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.       In conclusion, in big cities unemployment and deceiving cause homelessness.
However
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, it can be simply
solven
Correct your spelling
solved

If you don’t want solven to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

by creating special
organisations
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for helping find a job and making educated
video
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videos

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how
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on how

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do
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to

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not be deceived.

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