1) The diagrams above give information on transport and vehicle consume in Edmonton.

1) The diagrams above give information on transport and vehicle consume in Edmonton.
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The pie chart illustrates the information using the four various modes of transportation in the
city
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of Edmonton and the table shows
that
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five different reasons for people use
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cars in the same
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
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way of transportation is the most popular than the other vehicles
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the
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is mostly used for commuting to work. In detail, the
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mode of transportation is the majority of used in the given
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than the others, at 45 per cent. Light rail transit is placed in the second position of travel, which accounts for just above one-third. Surprisingly, Buses and taxis way of commutes have the same proportions, at one in ten.
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, in terms of the reason for using the
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in the
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, commuting to work is the most popular cause and it has just above half. Business is the second highest reason for using a
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, which accounts for 45 per cent. Two-fifths of utilising cars which take children to school. Shopping and Leisure activities are in the bottom place
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both these have the same proportions,
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15%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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