You would like to join the local orchestra. Write a letter of application to the orchestra. In the letter: – Introduce yourself and your instrument of choice – Explain how your credentials make you a good candidate – Express your enthusiasm for music

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Abduqodir. My sure name is Abdurasulov. I am 18 years old. I am studying in school and my school number is 17. I live in Akhangaran and my street is called "Archazor". I love

music

and musical groups.

Music

is my life. My hobby is playing the

guitar

. The

guitar

is my favourite instrument. I can very well play the

guitar

. When I was 10 years old, my grandfather gave me a

guitar

and I have been studying with the

guitar

for 5 years.

Guitar

is part of my life. My

guitar

has 5 strings and I have a key for playing strings. I love my

guitar

. I want to join your

orchestra

team. As I am going to

orchestra

. I have a lot of diplomas and certificates. I get it when I attend to competition. My diplomas and certificates caused me to be in the

orchestra

. I am always listening to

music

. When I do my housework, homework and other. When I listen to

music

my heart is fair and me to sing. Respectable

orchestra

members I hope you choose me. Yours sincerely, Abduqodir

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Vocabulary

Try to use a range of sophisticated vocabulary that accurately conveys your ideas and experiences.

Structure

Consider organizing your letter into clear paragraphs, each dedicated to a specific topic (introduction, your instrumental skills, credentials, enthusiasm for music, and a concluding statement).

Coherence

Enhance coherence by linking ideas more explicitly, possibly through the use of connecting words or phrases.

Passion

Your passion for music and the guitar is evident, adding a personal touch to the application.

Depth

The personal anecdotes about your guitar and musical journey add depth to your application.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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0Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

192 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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