You would like to join the local orchestra. Write a letter of application to the orchestra. In the letter: – Introduce yourself and your instrument of choice – Explain how your credentials make you a good candidate – Express your enthusiasm for music
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing
this
letter to join your International orchestra
. I heard about your group from my friend and he showed me an advertisement for your orchestra
. I think your orchestra
is attractive and unusual. So, I want to submit my candidacy.
My full name is Xudoyberdiyev Abduvokhid. I play the piano and I have been involved in music since 2015.I can play on the piano perfectly.
I completed my graduation from Artist University in 2020.I worked in a theatre called Qodiriy in Tashkent. I wanted to switch my job because I would like to participate in the International Orchestra
. I reckon I am suitable for your orchestra
.
If you have any questions or invitations, don't hesitate to call me.Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Abduvokhid XudoyberdiyevSubmitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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Consider expanding on your enthusiasm for music with specific examples or experiences that highlight your passion.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a smoother flow between your introduction, credentials, and the expression of enthusiasm.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear introduction, body, and closing.
task achievement
Appropriate tone and polite language are maintained throughout the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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