Nowadays, many individuals prefer to purchase products from well-known brands, including clothing, automobiles, and other stuff. What drives this behaviour? Do you consider that to be a good or bad development?
In my
opinion
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opinion,
people
is modern. They like to wear or take a good product. If we talk about any kind of gadget or stuff
every individual like to buy from long lasting
running Add a hyphen
long-lasting
stuff
. It is going to show society getting Correct article usage
a wealth
wealth
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wealthy
life style
. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
This
is great
sign for Add an article
a great
county
department. Meanwhile Correct article usage
the county
individual
residing good Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
life style
. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
Now days
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Nowadays
people
is
educated Change the verb form
are
That is
why people
choose branded things
. Because things
are reliable and superior .
Although
when the company demonstrate thing
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things
people
get curious from advertisment
every individual Correct your spelling
advertisements
like
to purchase from the company Replace the word
likes
Brand
. But some
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in some
of
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apply
case
we observe some Fix the agreement mistake
cases
of
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apply
people
take luxury stuff
for good
impression on society Add an article
a good
as well as
show
off Fix the infinitive
to show
things
. Or maybe trusted
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a trusted
brand
available
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is available
on the other hand
a person get
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gets
inspire
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inspired
moles
or Change preposition
by moles
movie
wherever actors Wear Fix the agreement mistake
movies
people
willing the same things
. even it
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if it
does
expensive or not Verb problem
is
do
not issue for Unnecessary verb
apply
people
. Furthermore
company select brand
ambassador
who Fix the agreement mistake
ambassadors
has
familiar with Verb problem
are
public
or giant fame all over the. Correct article usage
the public
As we
as lunches through Correct word choice
We
famous
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the famous
personality
that makes each Fix the agreement mistake
personalities
any
every individual curious.
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and
Eventually
it is going good impact on Add a comma
Eventually,
country
. And contribute to Add an article
the country
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the country
country
development. Change noun form
country's
As well as
provide good
and healthy life . Add an article
a good
Also
it Add a comma
Also,
is
created lots of opportunities in Verb problem
has
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
People
is
giving time Change the verb form
are
them self
for grooming
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themself
themselves
Overall
purchase
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purchasing
Brand
stuff
its is show
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shows
people
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