Nowadays air travel is cheaper than in the past. Is this a positive or a negative development? Discuss and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that
traviling
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travelling
has become
prelavent
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relevant
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these
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days because
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air planes
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aeroplanes
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ticket
has
decline
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versus before
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to
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a few years
.
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While
it is a commonly held belief
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that traviling
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traviling
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travelling
by
plane
is better than using cars
due to
safety and
more
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apply
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convenient
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,there is
also
an argument that opposes it.In my
opinino
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opinion
,I consider that
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a new place by
plane
can lead to a great experience
due to
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high services and safety.
To begin
,there are several advantages when they
travel
on
plane
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a plane
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,
such
as wifi,
bavergas
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beverages
and food.
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,most of
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the passenger
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passenger
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passengers
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have
been
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claim
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travelled
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that travelling
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on
plane
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a plane
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offerd
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offered
to
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apply
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them
nice
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a nice
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trip and
best
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the best
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experience to go
and
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apply
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back faster and
easir
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easier
.In
addision
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addition
,The government has
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an implament
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implament
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implemented
implement
role
to make
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in making
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the
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air
plane
ticket
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tickets
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affordable for large scale of
people
that attitude
are contribute
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contributes
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flourished the
tourists
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tourist
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sector
to gain
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gaining
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high revenue.
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,
according to
a recent
study
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study,
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JPAN
have
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has
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the
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high profit in the national bank because they have the cheapest
ticket
in the world. Another point to consider
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is,People
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,
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that people
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who
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whom
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a
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apply
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tend to
travel
they
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have great mental health and
more
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are
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happier
comperd
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compared
compered
with
thoes
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those
prefer
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who prefer
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staying at home.it is
also
possible to say that many
domastic
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domestic
flight
companis
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companies
foster
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people
to
travel
through
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by
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giving them discounts and
free
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a free
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ticket
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tickets
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.
Moreover
,air
travel
has rapidly
advancment
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advanced
in order to
giving
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give
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the passenger the best
experinces
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experience
experiences
and satisfaction to
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on the same company.
For instance
,
saudi
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airlines
give
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allows
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their customer to
booked
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book
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in their company to engage their
competiton
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competition
to have
reward
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rewards
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. In conclusion,despite
people
having
diiferent
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different
viwes
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views
.I believe
travling
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travelling
is
such
a good
experince
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experience
if i had a
vecation
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vacation
vocation
i
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I
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would
travel
by
plane
to
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for
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relaxation and safety as
will
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well
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.
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