Nowadays air travel is cheaper than in the past. Is this a positive or a negative development? Discuss and give your own opinion.
There is no denying the fact that
traviling
has become Correct your spelling
travelling
prelavent
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relevant
prevalent
theses
days because Correct your spelling
these
the
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apply
air planes
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aeroplanes
ticket
has decline
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declined
versus before
a few yearsChange preposition
to
.
Rephrase
ago.
While
it is a commonly held belief Correct word choice
that traviling
traviling
by Correct your spelling
travelling
plane
is better than using cars due to
safety and more
Correct quantifier usage
apply
convenient
,there is Replace the word
convenience
also
an argument that opposes it.In my opinino
,I consider that Correct your spelling
opinion
visit
a new place by Wrong verb form
visiting
plane
can lead to a great experience due to
have
high services and safety.
Change the verb form
having
To begin
,there are several advantages when they travel
on plane
,Add an article
a plane
the plane
such
as wifi,bavergas
and food.Correct your spelling
beverages
In other words
,most of Add an article
the passenger
passenger
have Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
been
Unnecessary verb
apply
claim
Change the verb form
claiming
claimed
travelled
on Verb problem
that travelling
plane
Correct article usage
a plane
offerd
Correct your spelling
offered
to
them Change preposition
apply
nice
trip and Correct article usage
a nice
best
experience to go Correct article usage
the best
and
back faster and Correct word choice
apply
easir
.In Correct your spelling
easier
addision
,The government has Correct your spelling
addition
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an implament
implament
role Correct your spelling
implemented
implement
to make
Change preposition
in making
the
air Correct article usage
apply
plane
ticket
affordable for large scale of Fix the agreement mistake
tickets
people
that attitude are contribute
flourished the Wrong verb form
contributes
tourists
sector Fix the agreement mistake
tourist
to gain
high revenue.Change the verb form
gaining
For example
, according to
a recent study
JPAN Add a comma
study,
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
the
high profit in the national bank because they have the cheapest Correct article usage
a
ticket
in the world.
Another point to considerAdd a missing verb
is,People
,
Correct your spelling
that people
People
who
Change the pronoun
whom
a
tend to Correct article usage
apply
travel
they
have great mental health and Correct pronoun usage
apply
more
happier Correct your spelling
are
comperd
with Correct your spelling
compared
compered
thoes
Correct your spelling
those
prefer
staying at home.it is Correct pronoun usage
who prefer
also
possible to say that many domastic
flight Correct your spelling
domestic
companis
Correct your spelling
companies
foster
Verb problem
encourage
people
to travel
through
giving them discounts and Change preposition
by
free
Add an article
a free
ticket
.Fix the agreement mistake
tickets
Moreover
,air travel
has rapidly advancment
in order to Correct your spelling
advanced
giving
the passenger the best Change the verb
give
experinces
and satisfaction to Correct your spelling
experience
experiences
rebooked
on the same company.Wrong verb form
rebook
For instance
, saudi
airlines Change the capitalization
Saudi
give
their customer to Verb problem
allows
booked
in their company to engage their Change the form of the verb
book
competiton
to have Correct your spelling
competition
reward
.
In conclusion,despite Fix the agreement mistake
rewards
people
having diiferent
Correct your spelling
different
viwes
.I believe Correct your spelling
views
travling
is Correct your spelling
travelling
such
a good experince
if i had a Correct your spelling
experience
vecation
Correct your spelling
vacation
vocation
i
would Change the capitalization
I
travel
by plane
to
relaxation and safety as Change preposition
for
will
.Correct your spelling
well
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