The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map describes changes
of
a public library in 20 Change preposition
in
years
.
It is noticeanle
that more spare space Correct your spelling
noticeable
are
provided nowadays as two tables and multiple chairs are removed currently Change the verb form
is
comparing
to 20 Wrong verb form
compared
years
ago.
Looking into more details, after entering the entrance, on the right side of the room
, the enquiry desk was transformed in to
a cafe. On the same side, Join the words
into
in
the end of the library, a lecture Change the preposition
at
room
took place
of Correct article usage
the place
children's
book Correct article usage
the children's
section
. Between children's
Correct article usage
the children's
books
section
and the enquiry desk was area
for adult fiction Add an article
an area
the area
books
20 years
ago, which now added information
desk and self-service machines.
On the left side of the Correct article usage
an information
room
, we can tell that the reading room
which contains newspapers and magazines 20 years
ago beside the entrance, has now turned in to
a computer Correct your spelling
into
room
. Walking along the aisle to the end of the library, we can see an area of children's fiction books
, contains a pair of sofa
and some storytelling events, which was a Fix the agreement mistake
sofas
section
of CDs, videos and computer games. Between these two areas, it is now a section
contains
all reference Wrong verb form
containing
books
instead
of adult fiction books
20 years
ago.Submitted by 1434110674 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, room, section, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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