The diagram shows how sugar is made from sugar cane

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diagram the 7 main steps of producing

sugar

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from

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cane, starting with growing and ending with drying and cooling. The process of manufacturing

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of

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begins with

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of a plant named

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cane, which could take as long as 15 to 18 weeks to grow. After growing the plant, it has to be harvested either using heavy

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machinery

or even by hand.

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the harvested ingredient has to be crushed and transformed into a juice to be filtered using limestone for the next step. The purified liquid gets heated up for the following step.

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stage, which is called Evaporation, is done to make

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out of the substance from

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process. When the

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is produced in the evaporator, gets

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to another device named

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and is used in order to

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separate

sugar

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crystals

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syrup

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the

sugar

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crystals

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are created and have to be dried and cooled as the final step. In the summarization, the

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crystals

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are created out of 7 steps which

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plantation

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a plantation

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of the herbals and

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extracting and drying

sugar

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crystals

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syrup

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the syrup

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