The diagram shows how sugar is made from sugar cane
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diagram the 7 main steps of producing sugar
from sugar
cane, starting with growing and ending with drying and cooling.
The process of manufacturing crystals
of sugar
begins with plantation
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the plantation
sugar
cane, which could take as long as 15 to 18 weeks to grow. After growing the plant, it has to be harvested either using heavy machinary
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machinery
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the harvested ingredient has to be crushed and transformed into a juice to be filtered using limestone for the next step.
The purified liquid gets heated up for the following step. In
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a centrifuge
seprate
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separate
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crystals
from syrup
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sugar
crystals
are created and have to be dried and cooled as the final step.
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crystals
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a plantation
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the syrup
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