The diagram shows how sugar is made from sugar cane

The diagram shows how sugar is made from sugar cane
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obersable
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observable
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in
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diagram the 7 main steps of producing
sugar
from
sugar
cane, starting with growing and ending with drying and cooling. The process of manufacturing
crystals
of
sugar
begins with
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the plantation
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of a plant named
sugar
cane, which could take as long as 15 to 18 weeks to grow. After growing the plant, it has to be harvested either using heavy
machinary
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machinery
or even by hand.
Next,
the harvested ingredient has to be crushed and transformed into a juice to be filtered using limestone for the next step. The purified liquid gets heated up for the following step.
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this
stage, which is called Evaporation, is done to make
syrup
out of the substance from
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process. When the
syrup
is produced in the evaporator, gets
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to another device named
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a centrifuge
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and is used in order to
seprate
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separate
sugar
crystals
from
syrup
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the syrup
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. In
this
section
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the
sugar
crystals
are created and have to be dried and cooled as the final step. In the summarization, the
sugar
crystals
are created out of 7 steps which
are started
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as
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plantation
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a plantation
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of the herbals and
ends
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to
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up
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extracting and drying
sugar
crystals
from
syrup
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the syrup
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