The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and in 2020

The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and in 2020
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The chart presents the allocation of jobs among three different occupations in
countries
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from 1980 and 2020.
Overall
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, services exhibited growth among all three jobs in three different nations in 20 years
while
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agriculture is the least sought-after work in two states with no reports of development. Among the 3
countries
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, it is noticeable that service has greatly increased in employment from 1980 to 2020 at approximately 7% in
countries
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A and B and 10% in country C.
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, the employment in industries of the two nations, both A and C, decreased
similarly
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in a 20-year period from 30% to 25%
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growth is noted from the remaining state which climbed from 30% to 45%.
On the other hand
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, in 1980 country B showed the highest allocation of work in the agricultural sector which was more than 60%
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it declined to 55% twenty years later. But unlike
countries
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A and C, which exhibited no improvement in the occupation relating to agriculture which stood stale at 20% and about 5% respectively.
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