The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
A glance at the line chart provided the demographic changes from 1940 to 2000 in three different areas including Columbia, Yamhill and
Washington
in the Untied
States of Oregon.
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United
Overall
, the population of the three countries
kept rising in the six decades and that of Washington
was significantly superior to that of the rest two countries
in the given time.
According to
the information shown in the graph, the population of Washington
was much higher than that of the rest two countries
in 1940 which
the gap was over 45 Correct word choice
when
thousands
.As the tendency kept growing, the population of Change to singular
thousand
Washington
skyrocketed to 241 thousands
in 2000 which was 4 times as many as that of Columbia in the meantime.Change to singular
thousand
On the other hand
, the number of citizens who lived in Yamhill witnessed a 2.5 -
times growth in the Change preposition
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mentoned
period which was from 20 thousand people to 15 thousand people.
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mentioned
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that the demographic rank of the three countries
did not change.Submitted by s99104032 on
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