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Band 4.5

Some people like to work in teams. Others prefer to work alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Everyone has
their
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 comfortable style of working, some prefer to
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 in teams,
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 others would rather
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 alone. Working
in
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 a project as a
team
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 member has a lot of benefits, like the exchange of knowledge among colleagues,
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 there are peers that can always support.
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, some people prefer to
work
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 alone ,because they can fully concentrate on a task,
also
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 all responsibility on one person,
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 it makes it easier to control results. I personally would like to
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 in a
team
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, because I like the supportive atmosphere. The benefit of being a part of a
team
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 is to share knowledge and experience between members,
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, all individuals would develop new skills.
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, senior workers usually assist and manage junior peers, so they can faster understand topics.
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, working in a
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 gives a feeling of unity and solidarity,
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 creates a positive atmosphere which motivates productive working.
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, some people choose to
work
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 alone because they do not need to worry about other people's abilities.
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, in universities when professors give group project tasks, usually responsible students negatively react to
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they would complete
work
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 for everyone.
That is
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 a drawback in
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team
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project
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,
hence
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 responsibility is divided among everyone,
no
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 one
taking
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 it.
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, some companies have managing problems,
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 teamwork is purely controlled. In conclusion, both styles of
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 processes have benefits. For a
team
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 is help and support from colleagues, and for those who prefer to
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 alone is total control over a task result. In my opinion, working in a
team
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 has more positive aspects.

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task achievement
Ensure your introduction includes a clear thesis statement that outlines your position and the main points of the essay. This helps readers understand your stance from the outset.
coherence and cohesion
Use a wider range of linking words and phrases to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs. While your essay demonstrates good logical structure, increased variety in transitions would enhance readability.
task achievement
Try to provide more specific examples to support your points. This could involve citing personal experiences, statistics, or studies. More detailed examples will strengthen your arguments and make them more convincing to the reader.
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