The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
In
this
case, the provided line graph illustrates the Caribbean Island tourist visiting numbers between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, this
tourist place has become more famous in the last
7 years. in 2017 number of visitors increased significantly than 2010. However
, it is aligned with the incremental of tourists who stay either on cruise ships or on the island.
Moreover
, the Caribbean have 3.5 million
visitors, which highly increased by approximately 250% to 2010. The travellers have 2 vacation living options, there are live on the sailing or stay on the archipelago. all options experienced significant growth also
lately. significantly, there are 2 million
on the big ship and 1.5 million
on that paradise land.
On the other hand
, compared to 2010, in 2017 there is shifting behaviour of the vacation style. in 2010, the number of tourists who preferred to live on the archipelago,
was 1 Remove the comma
apply
million
higher than the ship. although
in 2017 the number of guests staying on a cruise was 0.5 million
higher than the other options.
To conclude
, the Carribean tourism activities remarkably soared in the last
seven years. Furthermore
, there was also
a preference change in the living method from on the island to the big cruise.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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