The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site.

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The maps illustrate

schematic

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of an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and the future improvements that will be added.

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, we can see that Norbiton is planning to turn into

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urbanistic

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town with all

facilities

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the facilities

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and

housings

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housing

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. First of all, every industrial

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all along the east side of the

road

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and the

norhern

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northern

side of the ring

road

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in the

center

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of the town will be replaced by

housings

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housing

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in the North-West there will be a new

road

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constructed and extended and another small loop

road

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on the southern side. There will

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be a school in the East and

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playground just below the river between the school and the

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loop

road

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, there are other facilities

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as shops and

hospital

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hospitals

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planned around the south of the main circular

road

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in the west and east respectively. Another interesting detail is that the

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road

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will be extended till the end of

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North Norbiton with

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a bridge

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across the river and more

housings

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housing

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instead

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of farmland.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

173 words

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