The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site.
The maps illustrate
schematic
of an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and the future improvements that will be added.
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a schematic
Overall
, we can see that Norbiton is planning to turn into the
Correct article usage
an
urbanistic
town with all Replace the word
urbanised
facilities
and Correct article usage
the facilities
housings
.
First of all, every industrial Fix the agreement mistake
housing
units
all along the east side of the Change to a singular noun
unit
road
and the norhern
side of the ring Correct your spelling
northern
road
in the center
of the town will be replaced by Change the spelling
centre
housings
. Fix the agreement mistake
housing
Next,
in the North-West there will be a new road
constructed and extended and another small loop road
on the southern side. There will also
be a school in the East and large
playground just below the river between the school and the Correct article usage
a large
center
loop Change the spelling
centre
road
. Furthermore
, there are other facilities such
as shops and hospital
planned around the south of the main circular Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
road
in the west and east respectively. Another interesting detail is that the center
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centre
road
will be extended till the end of the
North Norbiton with Correct article usage
apply
bridge
across the river and more Add an article
a bridge
the bridge
housings
Fix the agreement mistake
housing
instead
of farmland.Submitted by dnm.best on
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