The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site.
The maps illustrate
schematic
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of an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and the future improvements that will be added.
Overall
, we can see that Norbiton is planning to turn into
the
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an
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urbanistic
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town with all
facilities
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the facilities
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and
housings
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housing
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. First of all, every industrial
units
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all along the east side of the
road
and the
norhern
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northern
side of the ring
road
in the
center
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of the town will be replaced by
housings
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housing
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.
Next,
in the North-West there will be a new
road
constructed and extended and another small loop
road
on the southern side. There will
also
be a school in the East and
large
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playground just below the river between the school and the
center
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loop
road
.
Furthermore
, there are other facilities
such
as shops and
hospital
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hospitals
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planned around the south of the main circular
road
in the west and east respectively. Another interesting detail is that the
center
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road
will be extended till the end of
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North Norbiton with
bridge
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a bridge
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across the river and more
housings
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housing
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instead
 of farmland.
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