The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asian regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300.

The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asian regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300.
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The line graph demonstrates the
life
expectancy
of various Asian people during a 350-year period between 1950 and 2300.
It is clear that
the
life
expectancy
for all the regions shown has been increasing, and they are expected to increase by 2300.
Also
, people in China are set to experience the major climb;
however
, those living in the Other Eastern areas always had and will have the highest value. In 1950, except for residents in Western
Asia
and Other Eastern
Asia
, who had expectations of almost 45 and 53
years
to live, respectively, other regions had considerably lower amounts.
Following
this
, the figure for China witnessed the sharpest climb, reaching about 70
years
, overtaking Western
Asia
in 1970.
While
Other Western
Asia
still had the highest amount, other regions experienced a slighter rise, ranging from 60 to 65
this
year. Consistently, the
life
expectancy
of individuals has been rising, and they are forecast to increase more stably until 2300. India, Western
Asia
, Other South-Central
Asia
, and South-eastern
Asia
will have a similar amount
at the end
of the period, significantly lower than China with approximately 100
years
. Interestingly, dwellers of the Other Eastern
Asia
will have had a
life
expectancy
of just over 105
years
, by the 2300.
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