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Chart shows amount of people using three the biggest airports in New York since 1995 for 2000

Chart shows amount of people using three the biggest airports in New York since 1995 for 2000
The chart illustrates the
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 of airport visitors in different airports in New York from 1995 to 2000.
Overall
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, it is seen that the
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 of visitors increased in 2000 compared to the beginning of the period, and the availability rate of LaGuardia airport is the highest among the three airports.
According to
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 data, The
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 of users of John F . Kennedy Airport rose by roughly 25
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 until 1997.
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, it experienced some fluctuation throughout the period. It decreased to above 30
million
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 in 1999. In 2000, it increased again to over 40
million
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, which is similar to Newark. In the case of Newark, which has the lowest
number
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 among the three airports. That figure was about 15
million
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. It rose gradually
by
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 approximately 27
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 to 41
million
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 until 1998. After that, it remained stable until 2000.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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