The maps illustrate the changes in the Local Museum at the north-east corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street in three separate years: 1957, 1987, 2007.
The maps show how the Local
Museum
that
located at the north-east corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street was transformed from 1957 to 2007.
Correct pronoun usage
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Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the museum
became larger in 2007 due to
the building construction's
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construction
expanded
.
In terms of the older building in 1957, the local Verb problem
apply
museum
had 4 main rooms
. The first one was an entrance hall which located
in the centre of the building. The east Add a missing verb
was located
side
of the entrance hall was a museum
store-
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storeroom
room
, and the west side
was a local history room
. Moreover
, there was a national history exhibition room
just above the other three rooms
. In addition
, the local museum
building was surrounded by garden
.
Regarding the new look in 2007, the local Add an article
a garden
the garden
museum
had 5 rooms
and a car park. First,
the museum
visitors could have an entrance from a museum
shop Correct word choice
and than
than
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then
went
to a reception Wrong verb form
go
room
by turned
right. From the receptionist, the visitors could go to the east Wrong verb form
turning
side
to a cafe or to the north side
to a local history room
. Furthermore
, there were two other rooms
, a special exhibition room
and an education centre room
.Submitted by mmmuuu on
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