The line graph below shows changes in teh amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975-2000

The line graph below shows changes in teh amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975-2000
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of three
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of junk food (pizza, Fish and chips, and hamburgers) eaten by adolescents in Australia between two periods of time (1975-2000).
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seen in the line graph, the consumption of pizza and Humberger food has an extremely massive
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with a slight steadiness over the period given,
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fish and
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fall and rise irregularly
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dramatically decline approximately to the lowest point during the five years. At the start of the period, the
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of pizza consumption started going up from zero in 1975 and
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continued to 20 in 1980 before reaching 60 in the third year.
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, it climbed to 80 and remained steady over the years at the point of 100. With regards to the
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of Humberger eaten, it began nearly from the lowest
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in the first year and
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grew sharply a little more than 80 in 1985, before it stayed uniform during the
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three years.
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, the consumption of fish and chips was at first nearly before the highest
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around 100 in 1095.
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figure, which fell a little bit to 80 and went back to the previous
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in 1985, has an incredibly rapid decrease before reaching the point of 40 in 2000
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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