The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The graph illustrates the average number of UK daily
travelers
on a basic day by Change the spelling
travellers
transportations
Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
such
as car
, bus
or train
over the Change the verb form
trains
period
of 60 years
.
Overall
, The
commuting by Correct article usage
apply
car
and train
have
a tendency Correct subject-verb agreement
has
of
Change preposition
to
growth
, Replace the word
grow
while
bus
usage has decline
over the Change the verb form
declined
last
years
. Correct quantifier usage
few years
In addition
, Car
usage is a positive line with hitting the highest point during this
period
show.
As can be seen over the period
of 30 years
first showed the difference of
commuting by Change preposition
between
bus
with the rest transportation
. In that, the number of people Change preposition
of transportation
commuted
by Change the form of the verb
commuting
bus
went down gradually in this
period
. However
, a
wide range of commuters Correct article usage
the
used
Correct pronoun usage
who used
car
increased relatively in 10 Fix the agreement mistake
cars
years
first,
after
that, it climbed up rapidly. And Correct word choice
and after
train
usage has the relative same tendency with
people by Change preposition
as
car
.
Next the period
between 2000 to 2023, this
can be seen transportation by car
and train
had the tendency of remaining
almost stable from 2000 to 2010.Change preposition
to remain
However
, both it
grow rapidly the great number of people during the Correct pronoun usage
apply
period
of 20- years
, especially for car
Fix the agreement mistake
cars
reach
a peak of highest commuters, at around 9 Wrong verb form
reached
millions
. Change to singular
million
While
the Correct quantifier usage
number of travelers
travelers
by Change the spelling
travellers
bus
declined constantly for the rest of the period
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, bus, train, period, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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