Human activities have negative effects on the plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this question. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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bad

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a bad

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impact

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many

species

in

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of

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plant

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plants

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and

animal

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animals

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and it is too late to tackle

this

problem.

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, others think there are solutions to solve

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.

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these two views. On the

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hand, there are countless animals and plants went extinct caused by humans.

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is

due to

massive industries activities, especially conventional

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ones

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like wood, energy,

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and electricities

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electricities

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which are basic necessities for life.

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,

cutting-trees

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cutting trees

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and

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the forest completely empty will eventually make the environment's equilibrium

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imbalance

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. Some animals lose their source of food and place to live

due to

this

.

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done in some remote

areas

where specific

species

are living like in Kalimantan which is the only place where orang utan

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result

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, it makes them lose their home and their food.

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, governance

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to take action in order to limit

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human activities. The authorities should build rules and

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for these

indutries

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industries

to do their business in the

nature

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areas

.

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, it will benefit both

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humans and other

species

.

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, oil companies could only dig

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specific

areas

that are set by specific

organization

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organizations

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that focus on

this

problem. Not only that, the companies should

also

apply for

time-permit

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time permits

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like 5 years in specific

areas

which will give the area time to recultivate again. In conclusion,

negative

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the negative

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impact has been done by

human

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humans

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to

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many

species

due to

companies' greed. It is too late for some of them, but in my

opinion

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the government could take measures to reduce the damage or even create better

policy

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policies

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to bring better life quality among humans, plants, and animals.