The pie charts show the revenue source for U.S. highways for last year and U.S. highway expenditure by type for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relecant.

The pie charts show the revenue source for U.S. highways for last year and U.S. highway expenditure by type for last year. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relecant.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of
source
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sources
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used for U.S. highways for
last
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year and U.S. highway spending by type for
last
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year. There are
a
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apply
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six directions Motor-Fuel
Taxes
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, Vehicle
Taxes
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, Tolls, Bonds, General Funds and Other.
Overall
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, The most used source was
Motor-Fuel
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motor fuel
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taxes
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at
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25%,
and
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followed by General Funds at 23,4 per cent,
while
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the
least
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lowest
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percent
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percentage
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of revenue was Tolls, Bonds and
Motor-Vehicle
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vehicle taxes
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Taxes
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. The Other percentage of the revenue sources was Other which made up 20.3%. The
last
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one from 6 directions is Tolls which made up 6.2%
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words taxes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • revenue sources
  • expenditure
  • proportions
  • significant disparities
  • maintenance
  • expansion
  • administration
  • safety improvements
  • correlated
  • mismatches
  • aligned categories
  • efficiency
  • priorities
  • budgeting
  • sustainability
  • infrastructure
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