The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
THE GIVEN CHART INDICATES THE DATA ABOUT HOW MANY GIRLS PER 100 BOYS ENROLLED IN VARIOUS LEVELS OF
EDUCATION
TYPES IN BOTH DEVELOPED AND DEVELOPING COUNTRIES
BETWEEN 1990 AND 1998. OVERALL
, IT IS EVIDENT FROM THE GRAPH THAT THE PREFERENCE FOR TERTIARY EDUCATION
TYPE HAD THE HIGHEST SHARE AND CAME AT THE TOP OF THE LIST IN DEVELOPED COUNTRIES
AND ACCOUNTED FOR 112 AND 105 IN 1998 AND 1990, RESPECTIVELY. LOOKING AT THE DETAILS, THE NUMBER OF GIRLS FOR PRIMARY EDUCATION
INCREASED IN DEVELOPING COUNTRIES
AS HIGH AS DEVELOPED COUNTRIES
AND RANKED 87 IN 1998. MOREOVER
, ENROLLED GIRLS FOR
SECONDARY Change preposition
IN
EDUCATION
REPORTED 72 IN DEVELOPING COUNTRIES
IN 1990 WHILE
THIS
PROPORTION RANKED 98 IN DEVELOPED COUNTRIES
. ALSO
, THIS
RATE WITNESSED A GRADUAL ASCENT IN 1998 AND REACHED 82 IN DEVELOPING COUNTRIES
AT THE SAME TIME. FURTHERMORE
, THE SHARE OF DEVELOPING COUNTRIES
FOLLOWED THE LOWEST PATTERN AMONG THE WHOLE LIST AND RESPONSIBLE FOR 66 AND 75 IN 1990 AND 1998, RESPECTIVELYSubmitted by feruzayla2006 on
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